Charles, hadn't thought of it that way. Traditional haiku consists of 5,7,5 sound units. The above has 4,7,4 followed by 4,7,3. I was not trying to do haiku. I just wrote what came. Thanks for bringing it up. Was thinking about you this morn and wondering how you are doing.
would you consider this a "haiku?"
ReplyDeleteCharles, hadn't thought of it that way. Traditional haiku consists of 5,7,5 sound units. The above has 4,7,4 followed by 4,7,3. I was not trying to do haiku. I just wrote what came.
ReplyDeleteThanks for bringing it up. Was thinking about you this morn and wondering how you are doing.
There's nothing like letting go to sharpen your senses and open your heart. Let go, and keep letting go... It is amazing how good it feels.
ReplyDeleteBeuautiful and to the point.
ReplyDeleteHiking in GC tommorrow, will think of you down in the bowels of the great mystery.
Love Tania
Hi, George:
ReplyDeleteI am doing great. My practice is excellent and my research into the more esoteric aspects are going really well.
Tho I don't comment much I am following your blogs for the interesting views you provide.
Kanpai Leatherneck!